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听Preamble

I have assembled here some ideas and assignments that developed from my work as a Writing in the Disciplines (WID) Fellow in the Fall 2011 term at 成人黑料.听 In my dual roles as teacher in the Department of English and professional writer (poet and sometime critic), I came to the WID working group already convinced of the powerful link between writing and critical thinking.听 I believe in the writing-to-learn process.听 The stumbling block for me has been my evaluation methods coupled with the sheer volume of work I am expected to evaluate.听 These two things together made me a bit cautious about assigning yet more writing.听 Working with the other WID Fellows and WID Coordinator Ian MacKenzie, I have expanded my tool kit.听 I am glad to share some of these tools in this online portfolio.

 

Section 1:听 Wherein the Author Reflects on Her Own Writing-to-Learn Experience and Thinks about the Link between Writing and Critical Thinking

I know now that writing is a thinking tool, but as a student in high school and later in undergraduate studies in English and French, I didn’t know it.听 I don’t think I cottoned on to that notion and practice at all until I was struggling with writer’s block as I was writing my dissertation and, out of desperation, I tried writing what I heard someone call a “zero draft” of a chapter.听 It was essentially exploratory writing that helped me utter something that might not have a direction but was at least something to counter the void of silence.听 Before graduate school I had never had to grapple with revisions after submitting work for critique and evaluation.听 My process had always been to write down what I thought were well-formulated thoughts and ideas.听 I thought that, for expository prose, the ideas preceded their formulation in writing.

As a student, then, I didn’t conceive of writing as generative.听 I would puzzle over a topic for at least two weeks before writing anything other than marginal notes in my books or amassing quotations from primary and secondary sources.听 I had a pretty tortuous process of composition.听 I also submitted all my papers late.听 I composed in pencil and had to have a 鈥渃lean draft,鈥� which meant that I would erase anything not 鈥減erfect鈥� and reformulate it until I felt it was fully cooked.听 Until everything on the page was solid in terms of idea and articulation, there was no going forward.听 I spent time just recopying out what I thought of as the fully-cooked portion before being able to plod on.听 Peter Elbow writes about the extra burden that writing can impose on the writer, and this definitely describes my early experience: 鈥淢ost of the time in speaking, we settle for the catch-as-catch-can way in which the words tumble out.听 In writing, however, there’s a chance to try to get them right. But the opportunity to get them right is a terrible burden: you can work for two hours trying to get a paragraph “right” and discover it’s not right at all.鈥澨� As a beginning academic writer, I was pretty afraid of anything that suggested 鈥渕ess.鈥�

And yet now I know that to bake a cake you鈥檝e got to be willing to make a mess.听 There鈥檚 also that old saying, attributed to E.M. Forster, 鈥淗ow can I tell what I think till I see what I say?鈥� that seems so much less flaky now than it did when I was a teenager.

I鈥檝e spent considerable energy in the classroom trying to model for students how one arrives at an idea, how one formulates a thesis, how one makes and supports an argument.听 Mostly, to date, I have focused on verbal articulations of thought鈥攚ays of saying.听 As I see it, a large part of the process (the really rigorous part) is in testing what one says against what one sees, what is really there, and not just what one wants to see or expects to see.听 So one has to slow down the process of looking at the evidence before jumping to a half-baked formulation.听 If students can do this with their writing, as a process, their responses to a literary text become more sophisticated.听 Their critical thinking skills go up in caliber.

In her essay titled 鈥淯sing Focused Freewriting to Promote Critical Thinking,鈥� Lynn Hammond suggests that the key benefit of using focused freewriting as a writing-to-learn tool is that it prevents students from jumping to a thesis before all the evidence is considered:

My experience with college freshman and first-year law students is that both of them tend to be so worried about getting to a 鈥榬ight鈥� answer that they abbreviate the process of invention: their need to arrive at a persuasive product makes them shortchange the analytical process. [鈥�] An advantage of focused freewriting over first-draft writing is that it prolongs and structures the exploratory stage, whereas draft writing tends to push for closure.听 Foreshortening the analytical process is one of the most fundamental problems of 鈥� students鈥�, and this procedure above all helps avert this premature closure鈥� (qtd. in Bean 113).

What Hammond observes makes sense to me.听 Below I have provided a link to my own (recently revised) version of a Writing-to-learn or 鈥渁ctive learning activity.鈥�

鈥� Developing a Thesis for a Critical Analysis of a Poem (freewrite)

 

Section 2: Containing Sundry Matters Related to Informal Exploratory Writing, Including the Example of My Students鈥� 鈥淩iffs鈥� on the Blues

None of my high school teachers or university professors had espoused exploratory writing or asked to see drafts of any writing.听 Everything was pretty product-oriented.听 In hindsight, I think that pursuing an advanced degree in English at a research university can itself erode one鈥檚 tolerance for process.

Then I wonder, too, is it significant that I grew up in the age of Liquid Paper and erasable pens?

A colleague of mine at Dawson, Barbara Moser, introduced me to the practice of having students 鈥渇reewrite鈥� in the method described by Peter Elbow (鈥淔reewriting鈥�).听 It was exciting.听 But at first, I admit, it seemed a bit like 鈥渇lying by the seat of your pants.鈥澨� That鈥檚 because, by that time, I had been conditioned to favor to the top-down pedagogical model, typified by the polished lecture.听 It also takes real effort to counter 鈥渃losure-oriented鈥� students鈥� impression of exploratory writing as 鈥渂usywork,鈥� as John C. Bean puts it (99).听 To use this method of exploratory writing in the classroom seemed risky, but the potential payoff in terms of seeing fresh, lively, and thoughtful student writing made it worth the risk.

Key to the practice, it seems to me, is to value process and to reward risk-taking on the part of students in speaking and writing in the classroom.听 I am committed to practicing what Daniel J. Shea calls 鈥渃onnected teaching,鈥� an alternative to the 鈥渟eparated,鈥� detached method of teaching that assumes a top-down model of knowledge transmission (鈥淭he Grammar of Connected Teaching鈥�).听 Empowering students to claim what they know, while also promoting and providing the tools for rigorous intellectual inquiry and critical thinking, is fairly challenging.听 It involves a lot of 鈥渢hinking on your feet.鈥澨� In her poem, 鈥淔ood,鈥� Canadian poet Bronwen Wallace recalls the challenging and enabling learning forum she took part in while seated at the dinner table of her political-activist friends.听 She recalls Jessie Glaberman鈥檚 encouragement 鈥渢o say what isn鈥檛 finished, what seems / crazy.听 Just say what you can; / we鈥檒l look at it together.鈥� 听That is something that I try to convey to students during classroom discussions and when they consult with me in my office hours.听 And then I initiate and encourage that process of 鈥渓ooking at,鈥� of interrogating, and nuancing ideas and formulations together.

Getting students to claim what they know is only a first step; inspiring them to stay hard on the trail of what they don鈥檛 know is another challenge.听 As Nobel laureate Wislawa Szymborska put it, 鈥渁ny knowledge that doesn鈥檛 lead to new questions quickly dies out: it fails to maintain the temperature required for sustaining life.鈥澨� Helping students to formulate and discover answers to their own burning questions motivates and energizes me in the classroom, in office consultations, and while I am developing my own teaching strategies and course materials.听 I am finding that getting students to engage in low-stakes exploratory writing is one of the best ways to help them claim what they know and to formulate the sorts of questions that will sustain thoughtful inquiry on their part.

I have used exploratory writing in my Creative Writing classes, and it has worked well.听 Certainly, in my own work as a poet, I depend on, and get a great deal from, exploratory writing, so I think I am able to convey its benefits and power to students in that context.听 Most creative writers keep journals that serve as a workbook for rough drafts, for jotting down dreams or images鈥攁 sort of catch-all for observations, overheard conversations, etc.鈥攚hich may or may not find their way into a finished draft of the writer鈥檚 work.听 Letting students see the raw, fragmentary, 鈥渕essy鈥� journals of writers frees them up to muddle around in their own ideas and express them in their 鈥渟peaking voice prose.鈥�

In all my classes, a positive measure I have adopted is discouraging the use of correction tape and erasers for in-class exploratory writing.

Bean has some particularly good suggestions in Chapter 6 for incorporating exploratory writing.

While teaching Blues poetry in my English 102 class, I used exploratory writing at the beginning of class to stimulate interest in what was to come, a technique that Bean includes in his list of suggestions (Bean 105).听听 I started by having students do an 8-minute focused 鈥渇reewrite鈥� on what they know (or don鈥檛 know) about the blues[1].听 I wrote on the board, 鈥淲hat I know about the blues is 鈥�,鈥� and asked students to finish the sentence and just keep going, writing non-stop for eight minutes, without any concern for spelling or notions of correctness.听 They were invited to free associate.听 If the Blues was one of Dawson鈥檚 athletic teams, they could explore that.听 If, for them, blues brought to mind more personal associations, that was fine, too.听 Anything was relevant: a memory, a sort of riff on the colour itself.听 I wanted to convey to students that that I value their prior knowledge and to provide them with an opportunity to bring it into play and build upon it.听 After the eight minutes of writing was over, I collected their pages and informally skimmed them aloud on the spot, looking for pertinent threads, interesting connections, and idiosyncratic takes on the concept. 听Usually, students will say at first that they know nothing about a subject.听 But, as it did with this exercise, their writing reveals they know more than they supposed.听 This might be tru especially when the stakes are low (the work is not for evaluation).

Here are some unedited excerpts from our in-class freewrite:

鈥淭he blues is raw, its lonely but its not alone, everybody gets the blues, even if they don鈥檛 sing it.鈥� 鈥擪.奥.

鈥淚 also know that the blues are a genre of music.听 It has a lot of depth to it.听 It has raw emotion in it.听 Usually when the singer sings the blues, it means they鈥檝e ben through heartbreak or troubled times.听 You can really hear the emotion in the singers voice.听 You can feel their pain and experience their story.听 I also know what it means to have the blues.听 When you have the blues it means that you鈥檙e feeling down, you鈥檙e feeling sad.听 The blues is a way to let out all their pain.听 They express it through song or poetry.听 B.B. King comes to mind when I think of the blues.听 I imagine all these jazz/blues singers in the 1930鈥檚-1940鈥檚.听 A big blues club with people in nice suits, ties and hats.鈥�听 鈥� S.N.

“What I know about the blues is almost nothing, that is why I tried to be prepared for this class by searching in internet to know what is it.听 [鈥�]听 Blues is mainly found in songs and the stanza is composed of 3 lines in which one or two of these lines will be repeated in each stanza.鈥澨� 鈥� M.T.

鈥淲hat I know about the blues is it is a colour, a way to express sadness and it is a genre of music.听 Popularized in the Southern states in the U.S. in the 20^th c.鈥澨� 鈥� T.J.

鈥淲hat I know about the blues is鈥� Deep murky waters / gelid sea floors / Rainy days misery听听听听听听听 cold, stagnant humid air / cigarette smoke听听听 thick overcoat / inhale exhale more rain falls / torrential downpour听 flooded streets violent / currents听听听 sweeping up grime and city trash鈥澨� 鈥� A. D.

鈥淢aybe it has to do with the color itself as blue depending on the shade is a darker color that can be associated with being dark, down and sad.听 Or perhaps blue is associated with water which can be related to tears which might be why this sad form or expressing ourselves through song is called the blues.鈥�听 鈥� T.H.

鈥淲hat I know about the blues is鈥�grounded in the lamentation-fueled songs and poems of slavery and post-slavery era African Americans. [鈥�]听 There are many stories about famous blues players having secret dealings with the occult, forging Faustian bargains with malevolent entities, trading their souls for musical skill and success.鈥�听 S.Z.

鈥渢hose who scarcely know much of the blues think that it always starts with 鈥業 woke up this morning,鈥� although it isn鈥檛 the case.听 The Blues is mostly a dark and sullen type of art, representing a more somber side of life.鈥澨� 鈥� G.A.

鈥淲hat I know about the blues is鈥�Its the back bone of jazz / The original funk pazzazz.听 / Blues can only come from the heart / Its more than just musical art.鈥�听 鈥� C.R.

鈥淲hat I know about the blues is blue.听 What I know about the blues is slow. [鈥�]听 What I know about the blues is my home games where I wear all blue.听 What I know about the blues is scoring three goals in blue with the blues.鈥澨� 鈥� A.R.A.

鈥淭he blues is a dark place we go to in order to find the light.鈥�听 鈥� K.M.

 

Section 3:听 Containing Matter Accommodated to Formal Writing Assignments

In English courses at Dawson, professors typically have as part of the evaluation three essays “or the equivalent.”听 Typically, I have assigned three separate essays on (at least) three different primary texts.听 Talking with other professors in my department, I learned that it is common practice here to have one essay written in class, to minimize the chances of plagiarism (to have a baseline for each student’s writing style).听 A ministerial objective is that one of the essays must be a 1000-word analytical essay.听 So this 1000-word essay is for sure a 鈥渉igh-stakes鈥� assignment.听 Usually, in my courses, it is worth 30% of the final grade.

Typically, I have distributed the big essay assignment three weeks before it is due.听 All of the class work that occurs between the time the essay question and primary text(s) are distributed and the time the finished essay is to be submitted for evaluation is related to the assignment.听 Often we have a “workshop day” involving peer-review and teacher assistance with introductory paragraphs and integrating and documenting quotations.

Last term in my 102 Poetry course, I did something different for the 鈥渉igh stakes鈥� essay.听 I developed a 鈥渟caffolding assignment鈥� that divided the 30% in half, allotting half for process work leading up to the paper and half for product (the finished paper).

For their first in-class essay, students had written an essay-equivalent test on the villanelle “Lonely Hearts,” by British poet Wendy Cope.听 They had not seen the poem before the test.听 The test’s format is short-answer and full paragraph.听 The questions require that students explore and analyze such aspects as poetic form, voice (speaker), rhyme, diction, repetition, and theme.听 What they do not have to do is structure an entire essay; my pointed questions direct their analysis.听 And the longer question on theme is presented at the end, so that students tackle it once they have carefully considered the details, devices, and form of the poem.听 Overall, I was pleased with students鈥� performance on this essay-equivalent test.听 However, the performance of many students indicated that they need more training in critical observation, the application of literary terms, and the discourse of literary analysis.

Owing to the nature of the essay-equivalent test, a student essentially could rearrange his/her answers in the test to assemble/construct a basic 500-600-word analytical essay on Cope’s poem. 听So I decided to use the first essay-equivalent test as a scaffolding for the high-stakes essay.听 This sort of scaffolding assignment seemed a promising way to incorporate the work of revision into the course.听 I had students revise their weakest answers from the short-answer test and afterwards construct an essay that could be developed into their 1000-word analytical essay in MLA format.

One of my concerns in developing this scaffolding assignment was that students would get bored with this one poem, and that could effect their commitment to the assignment, but that did not prove to be a problem.听 I also wondered whether I would get 34 nearly identical essays, as those who missed the mark a bit in their original analysis would travel remora-style on those who were stronger performers, and simply repeat what they have heard presented as examples of strong answers.听 I was pleasantly surprised to see that did not happen.听 In fact, many students wrote better term papers than they likely would have were they given a 鈥渇resh鈥� poem to write on.

How things panned out in terms of the students鈥� grades on this scaffolding assignment is interesting to me.听 Some students did not engage fully in the process work leading up to the final draft and, because that work was worth 15% of the final grade, these students鈥� overall mark was lower than they might have anticipated, were that mark based solely on the quality of the final paper they submitted.听 Some students wrote mediocre papers, but did all the process work and got full marks there, so they did much better than they might have expected.听 I was surprised by this too.听 It was a very leveling experience, which tended to reward those who were sturdy workers rather than those who happened to write well coming in to the class.

 

Reconditioning Students鈥� Approach to the Term Paper

Part of the value of a scaffolding approach to the term paper, I feel, is in its potential to recondition students鈥� approach to the term paper:听 to see it as a document that one develops and revises over a stretch of time, incorporating feedback along the way, rather than as a document 听that one writes at one sitting and submits for evaluation, hoping for the best.

As WID Fellows we considered the impact of boredom and alienation in the classroom, and devised ways to counter these numbing forces.听 We considered in particular how these affective states are even more activated by the animal we call the “term paper.”

Bean says that we “need to change the way some students perceive” term papers (197). 听I’m on board here because I learned first-hand, at home, that calling Brussels sprouts “Hero Buttons” made all the kids around the table want to try them! 听When you expect less pain and undo the conditioning that primes you to expect pain, there IS less pain. 听There might even be bliss.听 So can students get blissed out while performing the steps that add up to term paper?

Bean says that the big question is how to get students to be motivated enough to produce a paper that is no mere 鈥渋nfo dump鈥� but that instead shows evidence of critical thinking.听 The question, as he puts it, “is how to transform students from uninspired pseudo-plagiarists into engaged undergraduate researchers” (198). 听 One thing that helps in that endeavour is to actively work on demystifying the conventions of my discipline.

As part of that demystification process, I try to demonstrate that students already have a framework for what the literary critic does, in advancing an interpretation of a story or poem.听 Everybody has seen detective shows and courtroom dramas such as Law and Order or is familiar with high-profile cases in the news.听 Well, I talk about making arguments and presenting evidence in an English lit. essay as being analogous to those crucial elements of court cases.

For instance, I remind students that, in a murder trial, there are (at least) two competing stories and, if you are a lawyer working on that case, you have to make a case for your view of the evidence. 听In the courtroom, you definitely don’t want to forward a “statement of fact” thesis, something along the lines of saying to judge and jury, “Your honor, ladies and gentlemen of the jury: 听the victim is dead.鈥澨� Instead you want to make a case about how and why, which translates into arguments. 听I remind students that, in the murder trial, prosecutors typically argue something like the following: 听“The defendant committed the crime, and we know this because she had motive, she had opportunity, and the physical evidence connects her to the crime scene.” 听The prosecutor, in due course, also needs to offer the supporting evidence for her arguments and punch holes in the contrary evidence. 听In the murder trial, the prosecution might introduce as evidence incriminating email messages, construct time lines and knock down alibis, and present fingerprints, blood-splatter patterns, D.N.A. or other physical evidence. 听Following the courtroom analogy, I say that when you do secondary research and cite it in your paper, it is like calling an expert witness to the stand to back up your view of the evidence.

In the critical essay, the student draws his evidence from the details of the literary work before him. 听He looks at any relevant formal patterns, at imagery, metaphor, etc., to build a case about how the poem or story should be read. 听 I remind students to do the bulk of their secondary research (i.e. locate the “expert witnesses”) AFTER they know what they want to say (prosecutors don’t build a court case around which expert witnesses showed up when they did a Google search). 听Students seem to like thinking of the work they are doing to “build a case” as something dramatic, with some sort of stakes involved.

I agree wholeheartedly with Bean that teaching students how to read and write academic titles is a worthwhile endeavor. 听Formulating a working title helps students to keep the focus of their essay in view as they draft it. 听Thinking of the title as a piece of information that has to communicate something to other researchers (once indexed in a database) also encourages students to see their own essays as something they could ultimately share via publication. 听I spend part of a class leading up to the term paper talking about titles. 听We look at a list of actual paper titles of past student essays and we try to ascertain what the subject and focus of each paper is. 听Some titles on the list (“How to Become a Healer,” “Dealing with Death”)听sound more like instruction manuals or pamphlets than the titles of critical essays. 听Some titles sound more like reference book titles (“Literary Devices”). 听Some are just right: 听“Racism and Guilt in T.R. Hummer’s ‘The Rural Stops to Kill a Nine-Foot Cottonmouth,” and “The Significance of Structure and Imagery in Anne Caston’s ‘Anatomy’.” 听I show students the various conventional ways of structuring titles for critical essays in our discipline (including numbers 2 and 3 on page 209 in Bean). 听Then together we revise some of the weaker titles on the list until they do the work that they are supposed to do.

As one level of the scaffolding assignment I used last semester in my 102 Poetry course, I had students formulate the titles of their essays in class for 1 mark.听 I went around the classroom and gave feedback on their efforts. 听Their essays analyze a villanelle (poem) by contemporary British poet Wendy Cope. 听I’m happy to report that some of the titles I got for essays this term fulfill the requirements of academic titles in my discipline. 听Here are a few examples: 听“Desperation in Wendy Cope’s ‘Lonely Hearts’,” “The Trap of Loneliness in Wendy Cope’s ‘Lonely Hearts’,” 听“‘Lonely Hearts’ by Wendy Cope: ‘Can someone make my simple wish come true?” and “Wendy Cope’s ‘Lonely Hearts’: Echoes of “Eleanor Rigby.”

Formal assignments that integrate scaffolding, conferencing or peer review

鈥� Revision-Based Term Paper Assignment

鈥� Some Tips on Titling Your Essay

鈥� Peer-Review Assignment

 

Section 4:听 Wherein the Author Admits to Much Hand-Wringing Over Her Use of Grading Rubrics and Muses on Evaluation Techniques and Criteria in Her Two Disciplines

In my application to be a WID Fellow, I had admitted: “I know I spend more time grading individual assignments than I should. 听I experience the peculiar angst of diminishing returns when it comes to marking. 听Over the years I have tried a variety of ways of approaching the evaluation of writing assignments, including using rubrics of my own and others鈥� design. 听Even so, I have become frustrated with correcting the minutiae of writing, to little effect. 听I would like to maximize the return I get on the energy I expend, and see my feedback reflected in improved writing and improved critical thinking on the part of my students.”听 That is the crux of the matter for me.

I face different dilemmas regarding grading in the various courses that I teach.听 But the dilemma of how to be fair to the students and fair to myself at the same time is a recurrent one.

I鈥檝e tried almost everything.听 I鈥檝e never tried the (joke) 鈥渢hrow the papers down the stairs to rank them鈥� method.听 But I have read all the papers once without grading to rank them into As, Bs, Cs, Ds and possible Fs, and then ordered them by question within those grade ranges, and then reread them to grade them.听 Bean refers to this tactic in his discussion of holistic grading (263).听 I鈥檝e resorted too often to line editing.听 And I鈥檝e gotten 鈥渓ocked in鈥� to unproductive patterns, for instance feeling obliged to give all papers 50 minutes of my time because I gave two or three that much.听 At that point, I probably need an intervention.听 Or a glass of scotch.

Evaluating critical writing is really different than evaluating creative writing.听 For creative writing, I really prefer to withhold (or forego assigning) the grade altogether and just give revision-based feedback.听 Intuitively, to me, it seems a bit counter-productive to receive a grade-based evaluation on creative writing.听 Withholding the grade until a student brings a revised draft of the work to show me seems to work well.

Because students in creative writing have considerable difficulty producing work that meets the expectations I put forward in the assignment instructions鈥攖hat is, work that demonstrates an awareness of, and an attempt to explore, the various techniques and strategies that we learn about and practice in our in-class exercises鈥擨 have developed a sort of rubric for the evaluation of an image-based poem that I share with them when I assign the poem.听听听 For the techniques and strategies that we privilege in this assignment, such as 鈥渦se of figurative language (metaphor, simile)鈥� I circle one of the following: 鈥渘eeds work,鈥� 鈥淥K,鈥� 鈥済ood,鈥� or 鈥渟trong.鈥澨� Here 鈥淥K鈥� would indicate technique or effect that is satisfactory but not good.听 The difference been 鈥淥K鈥� and 鈥済ood鈥� here is like the difference between vending-machine coffee and fresh-brewed.听 Even then, I sometimes circle two side-by-side terms and draw an arrow, to indicate something like, 鈥渢his is good on its way to strong,鈥� or 鈥渕ostly good, but one instance of strong.鈥澨� I guess one of my dilemmas is that I always find it hard to slice the cake neatly.听听 My training in English literature has ingrained in me the tendency to qualify, qualify, qualify.听 This tendency to modulate my evaluative statements has ruined me for surveys of any sort (I liberated myself from responding to surveys when I turned 40) and, for me, it makes using rubrics devised in what Bean calls the analytic method very tortuous.

In my BXE English class, I have used analytic-method rubrics devised by other professors, which involved counting grammatical and spelling errors, deducting points for various organizational lapses, and formatting/presentation glitches.听 Then I used my calculator to add up the various half and quarter points, only to find, invariably, that the resulting grade is what I would have assigned in a holistic evaluation, which would have taken me half the time.

One problem with this sort of analytic-method rubric is that it assumes a student starts with 100% and deducts for each error or pre-established weakness.听 I feel that this method, a sort of elaborate accounting, puts the teacher in a position to justify the grade, to show how discrete elements haven鈥檛 鈥渁dded up鈥� to the sort of grade the student might expect.

Another problem with the sort of analytic-method rubric that I adopted is that it punishes, in a disproportionate way, the 鈥渂eautiful beast鈥� essay.听 That鈥檚 what I call the sort of paper that falls quite short on many of the pre-established criteria, but demonstrates an extraordinary sophistication of thought or sensibility.听 Usually the author of such a paper has the preferred gaze but not the preferred voice of the apprentice academic.听 Often the author of such a paper shows me something about a literary text that I hadn鈥檛 considered before and that is worthy of consideration.

Currently I alternate between or combine the methods and scales that Bean details in Chapter 15: analytic and holistic criteria, general and primary trait scales鈥擨鈥檝e sampled the whole buffet.听 My natural bent is to see writing as an organic whole, difficult to slice into component parts.听 Bean鈥檚 formulation of the question really resonates with me: 鈥淐an ideas really be separated from organization or clarity of expression from clarity of thought? (257).鈥�

One thing that might turn out to be a game changer for me is Bean鈥檚 distinction between grammar errors and stylistic concerns (in Chapter 14, page 248).听 To reflect my new awareness of 听these so-called lower-order concerns, I have recently reworked the essay-evaluation sheet that I developed many years ago, which was itself adapted from an old Rutgers University Composition Teaching Checklist (the original is no longer available online, as far as I can tell).听 As a W.I.D. Fellow, I gained awareness that the evaluation tool itself needs to be subject to revision.听 See 鈥淓ssay Checklist and Response鈥擳ake 1,鈥� below, for one of my older versions that focuses on problems in writing and thinking (the glass half empty approach), and see 鈥淓ssay Checklist and Response鈥擳ake 2鈥� for the newer version that highlights the positive (the glass half full approach).听 This latter version can be used as an evaluation sheet by the professor or as a peer-evaluation sheet for students working in pairs.

Strategies and tools for Evaluation

鈥� Essay Checklist and Response-Take 1

鈥� Essay Checklist and Response-Take 2

鈥� Image-Driven Poem Evaluation Sheet-1

 

Conclusion: Thoughts on Stickers

I hope that, in my jumbled 鈥渢ool bag鈥� of teaching and evaluation practices, offered here, others will find something to try out or adapt for their own purposes.

How can I synthesize what I have learned as a W.I.D. Fellow, except to say that the experience鈥攖he reading, the meeting with the other fellows, the blogging鈥攁ll of it has spurred on in me a kind of paradigm shift, a way of seeing college teaching as a process of discovery steeped in reflection about pedagogy, the self, and other learners.

I feel freer as a teacher, less locked in to habit, less likely to perpetuate systems that exist mostly because they have been handed down and not mostly because they are particularly effective.听 I feel open to trying things that challenge my preconceived notions.听 I can talk about teaching practices that I have felt a bit uncertain about.

For instance, I use stickers on students鈥� work.听 Sometimes my colleagues see me putting a sticker on an essay, and I feel as though they’ve caught me toting a box of Timbits to class, ingratiating myself with sugar and sparkles.听听 Sometimes I鈥檝e wondered whether a serious student will sneer at a sticker and feel that I鈥檓 not a serious teacher, more of a softie than a stickler for quality work.听 鈥淪he taught at McGill and UBC?鈥�

But I have seen students smile warmly when they see the sticker and mirthfully compare the sticker they received with other classmates鈥�.听 One student said, a little wistfully, 鈥淚 haven鈥檛 received a sticker since elementary school.鈥� 听听So I think they can be motivating.听 I like them because they are quick, easy, colourful, even kitschy, and have鈥攆or so many students鈥攑ositive associations.听 The surprise they give is the promise that it is still possible to be pleasantly surprised.

I buy the stickers in little booklets of multiple sheets in the dollar store: Teacher鈥檚 stickers.听 There are usually more 鈥淓xcellent!鈥� and 鈥淎+鈥� than I need, and not quite enough 鈥淕ood鈥� and 鈥淰ery Good.鈥澨� I鈥檓 not quite sure what to do with 鈥淵ou rock!鈥� and 鈥淕roovy!鈥澨� I really want more of the ones that say 鈥淕ood idea鈥� and 鈥淕ood thinking.鈥澨� I also appreciate the simple icon stickers鈥攁 pencil or a stack of books鈥攁nd I use these on papers that are in the failing or D range, next to my comments about how to improve this draft or how to succeed in upcoming assignments.听 I鈥檇 love to see a sticker that reads 鈥淥ne more draft would really help.鈥澨� There also aren鈥檛 stickers for uneven or middle-range work, for 鈥淕ood work, with room for improvement,鈥� or 鈥淪atisfactory work,鈥� or stickers that praise a single facet of the work: 鈥淭houghtful analysis here鈥� or 鈥淧romising research鈥� or 鈥淔abulous MLA-style formatting!鈥澨� I once considered making my own stickers, refining the messages, perhaps to say things like, 鈥淕ood idea, awkwardly expressed,鈥� or 鈥淏e precise and specific here鈥� or 鈥淏ring your point home,鈥� so I could affix a brightly-coloured message in the margin instead of carefully transcribing the same in green ink at 2 a.m. or while standing in the metro on the way to teach.听 So this is an open invitation to the sticker manufacturers of the world: Go ahead, make my day!听 And me, I鈥檒l keep on truckin鈥�.

 

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